Hmmmm. Applying that same method,
10 - 2.0 = 8 ; 8 / 10 = 80% loss? Can't be. And in your above example, 6 is more than half of 10.5, so therefore your loss is over 50%.
It should be:
(10. 5 / 18.5) * 100 = 56.76% loss for his night reading and,
(6 / 10.5) * 100 = 57.14% loss for his day...