Building up the plaster to reach fixtures is what they should do. My two older return lines stick out about an inch or so, and the plaster is built up and curved to reach them. And obviously getting it all perfectly smooth is not going to happen at a normal price level. Even in a house, getting level 5 walls is not something normally done and will be an upcharge.
That line in the last picture, though... I have no idea. My guess is that was the boundary between a couple workers, and they didn't properly smooth it out? Or they waited too long to smooth it out, and one side was too hard to properly work? Is the line sunken or sticking out?